MegaTailzChao
Mario Fan Games Galaxy: Full Game Consequences 2: What Has Tobe Done
Jan 12 2009, 7:43 PM

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on request of Marche100

Luigi Mario walked like speed of light back to his yosh and left behind the bad place behind him. Luigi Mario had to ride his yoshi really fast back to the office but Luigi Marios juice ran out. Luigi Mario jumped fast off the yoshi and landed on dead toads hands.

"Mario Mario is now these hands... i must kill the next boss and live up to full-game consequences!" Luigi Mario said out loud.

Luigi Mario picked up a hammer suit and aimed it at trees to see if he could. Luigi Mario shot and tree fell down in front of him. Luigi Mario seen eggs fall out of the tree and he put them back home safe.

"These tweeters dont have to see Mario Mario yet. its not time." Luigi Mario said to him.

Luigi Mario had to walked faster and was back at his office work and on a computer. He looked on the internet and found the next boss.

"I know his weakness now" Luigi Mario said. And after that he got emails from someone. Luigi Mario opened up the emails and read them.

"Dear Luigi Mario, how are you? I miss you at home come home safe and soon with Mario Mario for thanksgiving dinner. Love Peach." Luigi Mario looked at it and got sad and yelled "I WILL KILL THE BOSS AND MARIO MARIO WILL BE HAPPY SOUL!" then he turned on off the computer and wet on the platform again down to his other more faster yoshi that had juice in it this time.

Luigi Mario put the hammer suit on his yoshi and his fire flower and his ice flower that he found on the side of the yoshi. He went through world 1-1 and went fast like litning to back to Bowsers Castle and back to the bad place where Mario Mario was. Luigi Mario went off road and did spinjumps and landed on back tail but kept going too.

Luigi Mario went really fast again like before and was soon back again at Bowsers Castle but saw more zombie koppas. Luigi Mario said to them "Zombie koppas i have killed your friends at the old house and i dont want to shoot your heads. move near the countrysides and you will be friends of Luigi Mario." The zombie koppas said that "no we will kill you" and walked fast to Luigi Marios yoshi. Luigi Mario waited until they were in front of his yoshi and spin jumped off his saddle and stomped heads below and landed and walked fast to where the next boss was.

"you will be one of us!" yelled the dead zombie koppas. Luigi Mario laughed and shot a hammer at them.

Luigi Mario saw the next boss far down the road and walked slow this time. He walked really slow like a turtle and sat down on a rock and watched the next boss near the dead last boss and where the place that Mario Mario was. The next boss was laughing at Luigi Mario so Luigi Mario said "YOU WILL NOT LAUGH AT ME!" and threw a vegetable at him since that was his weakness.

The next boss died and Luigi Mario was happy. He walked over to the dead bosses and put them under the ground and planted pants on them so instead of messy dirt and dark there was pretty things there now to be happy.

Luigi Mario walked to where Mario Mario was lying dead and crushed from the next bosss feet and looked down. A tear droped out of Luigi Marios eye and landed on Mario Mario.

"You are dead bro and i killed the evil boss." Luigi Mario told Mario Mario

Then Luigi Mario saw something bad. A headgoomba was on Mario Mario! Mario Mario standed up and said "Luigi Mario... you got here slow and now i am zombie koppa. you will pay..."

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to be continued...?
 
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toodles_team
Jan 12 2009, 9:40 PM
Ah, the saga continues... ;)
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 12 2009, 10:56 PM
Quote (toodles_team on Jan 12 2009, 3:40 PM)
Ah, the saga continues... ;)

And, unfortunately, ends. :(


...For now!
 
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Arkatox
Jan 13 2009, 12:07 AM
D=.

From what little I read, all I can say is this: get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!
 
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YoshbotX000
Jan 13 2009, 12:43 AM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 12 2009, 11:07 PM)
D=.

From what little I read, all I can say is this: get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!

Perhaps it was done on purpose?
 
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Mr. Yoshbert
Jan 13 2009, 1:31 AM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 13 2009, 12:07 AM)
D=.

From what little I read, all I can say is this: get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!

Writting and grammer?

Anyways, pretty creative update you've got here! Maybe I should catch up on the other stories...
 
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BattyKoda
Jan 13 2009, 1:43 AM
Darn that fanfic.
 
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Elyk
Jan 13 2009, 2:17 AM
*part 3
http://www.mfgg.net/index.php?...m=02&id=293
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 13 2009, 4:19 AM
Quote (Elyk on Jan 12 2009, 8:17 PM)

No, this is the second, that was part two of the first. The second isn't long enough to split into two parts.

Quote (Arkatox on Jan 12 2009, 6:07 PM)
get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!

Wahahaha! You got yourself a sense of humor there, kid!
 
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Black Squirrel
Jan 13 2009, 10:39 AM
Trasher would have killed you back in the day =P
 
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supermariomaster
Jan 13 2009, 1:26 PM
3D_ssb1_Goomba_model's link doesn't work
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 13 2009, 3:26 PM
Quote (supermariomaster on Jan 13 2009, 7:26 AM)
3D_ssb1_Goomba_model's link doesn't work

It's been removed due to name confusion. Assuming Kiage Team resubmits it it should be back up soon enough.
 
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Yoshling 97
Jan 13 2009, 4:30 PM
Waitaminute. We ARE allowed to submit true ripped 3D models???

If we really are, I might be able to get some 3DS MAX ones... maybe.....
 
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DJ Yoshiman
Jan 13 2009, 5:21 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 12 2009, 6:07 PM)
D=.

From what little I read, all I can say is this: get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!

Get a sense of humour and a little research of well-known things for Pete's sake.
 
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supermariomaster
Jan 13 2009, 5:24 PM
Quote (MegaTailzChao on Jan 14 2009, 6:26 AM)
It's been removed due to name confusion. Assuming Kiage Team resubmits it it should be back up soon enough.

You couldn't have renamed it?
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 13 2009, 9:29 PM
Quote (supermariomaster on Jan 13 2009, 11:24 AM)
You couldn't have renamed it?

Someone thought it was stolen, so no not really!

Quote (Yoshling 97 on Jan 13 2009, 10:30 AM)
Waitaminute. We ARE allowed to submit true ripped 3D models???

If we really are, I might be able to get some 3DS MAX ones... maybe.....

That one was custom, not ripped, but hey if you want to I say go right ahead, I guess!
 
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True Mario
Jan 13 2009, 11:32 PM
Admittedly, I did not understand what this was based off of until, out of complete coincidence, I saw the Full-Life Consequences video a few days later and noticed the similarities. (That was back during part one)

Anyway, nice enough update.
 
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Marche100
Jan 14 2009, 9:43 PM
Wow. I can't believe you did it. Lol. Funny though. Here's to hoping Half Life never dies. :P (Or Mario)
 
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Arkatox
Jan 15 2009, 2:19 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 13 2009, 12:07 AM)
D=.

From what little I read, all I can say is this: get better at writting and grammer for Pete's sake!

Guys, what I meant by that, is that if you don't write something with good grammer and all of that, then it sounds pretty stupid, and looks like a little kid wrote it.

Yes, I know, I'm not too good with grammer myself, but I'm getting better!
 
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DJ Yoshiman
Jan 15 2009, 5:32 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 15 2009, 8:19 AM)
Guys, what I meant by that, is that if you don't write something with good grammer and all of that, then it sounds pretty stupid, and looks like a little kid wrote it.

Yes, I know, I'm not too good with grammer myself, but I'm getting better!

Okay, you know what, since no one yet has ever given a source since we started these wonderful stories, let me do so right now.

Ever wonder why MegaTailsChao has these horrible grammar and spelling mistake stories, despite every single other update containing nothing but correct grammar and spelling and punctuation? Here's why:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHxyZaZlaOs
 
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MrGuy
Jan 16 2009, 9:47 PM
Next update should be Mario Fan Games Galaxy: Marios in Space

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/29..._Halos_in_Space
 
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Nicholas Ainsworth
Jan 17 2009, 3:47 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 15 2009, 9:19 AM)
Guys, what I meant by that, is that if you don't write something with good grammer and all of that, then it sounds pretty stupid, and looks like a little kid wrote it.

Yes, I know, I'm not too good with grammer myself, but I'm getting better!

You're obviously not too good with spelling either.
 
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Mr. Malakoopa
Jan 18 2009, 12:05 AM
Too boring...
 
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Arkatox
Jan 18 2009, 6:39 PM
Quote (Nicholas Ainsworth on Jan 17 2009, 3:47 PM)
You're obviously not too good with spelling either.

I'm not.
 
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Buggo
Jan 19 2009, 4:35 PM
Quote (supermariomaster on Jan 13 2009, 1:26 PM)
3D_ssb1_Goomba_model's link doesn't work

I resubmitted it =)
It'll be up in a day or two.
 
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September
Jan 20 2009, 6:41 PM
I hope my submission gets in the next update!!
 
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OniLink10
Jan 22 2009, 12:24 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbHHmYIjZcE
Wow, someone really loves this story.
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 22 2009, 1:31 AM
Quote (OniLink10 on Jan 21 2009, 6:24 PM)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbHHmYIjZcE
Wow, someone really loves this story.

I love Weirdestchild FOREVER
 
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OniLink10
Jan 22 2009, 3:13 AM
Quote (September on Jan 20 2009, 10:41 AM)
I hope my submission gets in the next update!!

A month submitted something?!

MY BRAIN!
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 22 2009, 4:45 AM
Quote (OniLink10 on Jan 21 2009, 9:13 PM)
A month submitted something?!

MY BRAIN!

Yeah when you ignore them long enough they tend to do that.
 
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weirdestchild
Jan 22 2009, 11:00 AM
Quote (MegaTailzChao on Jan 21 2009, 9:31 PM)
I love Weirdestchild FOREVER

Later on today, you will all see the reading of the first Mario Fan Games Galaxy: Full Game Consequences, with more awesome voices.

Also, I love my self forever too.
 
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Arkatox
Jan 22 2009, 2:42 PM
Okay, this time I read it completely, and I have to say: Get an imagination that doesn't have to do with death and zombies!
 
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DJ Yoshiman
Jan 22 2009, 5:13 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 22 2009, 8:42 AM)
Okay, this time I read it completely, and I have to say: Get an imagination that doesn't have to do with death and zombies!

yeah but squirrelking doesn't have much other material
 
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MegaTailzChao
Jan 22 2009, 6:17 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 22 2009, 8:42 AM)
Okay, this time I read it completely, and I have to say: Get an imagination that doesn't have to do with death and zombies!

NO ARKATOX, YOU ARE THE DEMONS

AND THEN ARKATOX WAS A ZOMBIE
 
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Nicholas Ainsworth
Jan 22 2009, 9:25 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 22 2009, 9:42 AM)
Okay, this time I read it completely, and I have to say: Get an imagination that doesn't have to do with death and zombies!

Why don't you actually get an imagination?
 
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Arkatox
Jan 23 2009, 12:05 AM
Oh my goodness! I don't under stand the people on this site!

I hate it when fans makes Mario comics/storys/other stuff that have to do with death, zombies, and that stuff. IT'S JUST NOT MARIO!
 
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BattyKoda
Jan 23 2009, 3:07 AM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 22 2009, 6:05 PM)
Oh my goodness! I don't under stand the people on this site!

I hate it when fans makes Mario comics/storys/other stuff that have to do with death, zombies, and that stuff. IT'S JUST NOT MARIO!

Ugh. It was a parody. Don't make me send Headgoombas to your house.
 
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weirdestchild
Jan 23 2009, 3:41 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXqv7hFEgwE

FGC 1 has been read in it's entirety.
 
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Nicholas Ainsworth
Jan 23 2009, 6:29 PM
Quote (Arkatox on Jan 22 2009, 7:05 PM)
Oh my goodness! I don't under stand the people on this site!

I hate it when fans makes Mario comics/storys/other stuff that have to do with death, zombies, and that stuff. IT'S JUST NOT MARIO!

If you don't like it, you can always leave. No one's forcing you to stay, but I can't really say you're going to be wanted around here much longer if you keep acting like a five-year-old Mario purist.
 
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Neopolis
Jan 23 2009, 9:21 PM
Quote (MegaTailzChao on Jan 22 2009, 7:17 PM)
NO ARKATOX, YOU ARE THE DEMONS

AND THEN ARKATOX WAS A ZOMBIE

oh my god I laughed

<3 MTC

(Keep this in mind for your next update btw)
 
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Arkatox
Jan 23 2009, 11:05 PM
I apologize for my last comments here.

I didn't know that my comments would cause really negative attitudes and insults.

I just wanted to say that I didn't approve it.

~Arkatox~
 
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