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Custom Toad Sheet	By: ~~supercolton64~~
Well, as my first submission here on MFGG, I submitted my custom Toad sheet. There aren't many poses, but I do plan on updating it! Just tell me what you think of it!

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Format	Sprite Sheets	Sprites and animation frames saved in a static image medium.
Contents	Edited	Modification of existing sprites.

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	Created:	Nov 23 2007, 5:27 AM
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	Sword326 Nov 28 2007, 9:49 PM
It's not very detailed.


	mamaluigi Nov 29 2007, 12:17 AM
The body is too small and the head is odd shaped, and you used pillow shading mostly which makes it looks a bit ugly. Other than that it's okay.


	~~GoombaMaster~~ Nov 30 2007, 1:36 PM
i will be honest... it sux.


	SG3 Nov 30 2007, 2:26 PM
there you go, you say "shut up" to someone who says its not very detailed, and then in about one day you've started a flame-war and got muted. anyway, I will tell you what i think, and I won't cover it up with "keep working on it and you'll get better," or "its great for your first sheet, but could use some improvement," I'll just give it to you straight: its pillow shaded and the outline is quite weird, so in all honesty, its pretty crap. I know this is your first sheet, but that doesn't mean we have to tell you its great, and use it in our games/flashes.


	Mighty Ripper Nov 30 2007, 3:39 PM
Man. Why does everyone make a drama just for one sprite sheet? Anyways, Good for youre first custom.


	Anthiflo Nov 30 2007, 5:43 PM
I like, but it could be better


	Kurosaki Nov 30 2007, 5:51 PM
The thumbnail is the total essence of this thread. =P


	andross46 Nov 30 2007, 6:42 PM
every one can shut up; otherwise it might be usefull fer a mini game.


	Myuu Nov 30 2007, 7:54 PM
these aren't good, but they ARE his first customs, so don't blame him


	Irock Nov 30 2007, 8:52 PM
I luv them!


	Elyk Nov 30 2007, 9:44 PM
how did these get accepted? I don't give a crap if their your first, thats no excuse for horrible quality.


	Hyper bowser Nov 30 2007, 10:07 PM
Pretty good fore a first custom. But its a bit to blocky.


	Marios Main Man Nov 30 2007, 10:43 PM
kinda tiny, other n that perty good


	Twistendo Nov 30 2007, 10:57 PM
I don't get it supercolton wrote on the description of the toad sheet that he/she wanted feedback about it (last sentence) and someone wrote feedback, and BOOM! Oddly enough, he swears over it I agree with sword, its not detailed enough


	Autobobby1 Dec 1 2007, 7:06 AM
Well, how 'bout some actual advice? -The sprite is pretty small, making it hard to see the details. -The white could be lighter, so that it doesn't look like gray. -The shading of the red parts is odd and they need to be shaded more like circles and less like rectangles. The red colors, meanwhile, are more like pink. -All of the colors need more contrast so that we can notice the shading better. Toad's proportions seem a little odd. He should be more chubby. -The blue vest's shading could use some work. -Perhaps try giving each color three shades instead of two. Other than that, it's a good beginners' sprite. Keep practicing and you'll get better. And I have to give you points for even TRYING to make a custom sprite as one of your first attempts.


	Black Squirrel Dec 1 2007, 1:42 PM
Comments cleaned. But yeah, not awful but not great either.


	Dalton Dec 1 2007, 6:47 PM
Well, for me it's nice, but could improve. Last time I tried to make a custom King Bob-Omb it got in some weird stuff.


	Rotten Egg Dec 2 2007, 12:48 AM
STOP IT!!! PLEASE!!! IT IS DRIVING ME NUTS!!!!! D^X

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