As a custom sprite, great!
As a PIT sprite... Not so great... :P
But good start nonetheless.

thatnks, i no wat u mean by the not pit styled , because [it has a lighter shaded brown and the surface is mor rounded. heres a hint for my next sprite: pit shroobs! my friend is a really good spriter (mariomaster) and told me that it kicked butt

please try to avid talking like that, it makes it very hard to understand what you are trying to say. and why would you sprite Shroobs in PiT style when they already are? just wondering...