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Mario: Marios in Space

Feb 28 2009, 6:33 AM

Luigi Mario was in space and had powerps and was a army guy but he wasnt a hero liek Mario Mario so he didnt fly. Luigi Mario was one day in a place and shooting powerp at targits and then got a call on the mushroom tv in the ship that said to him "LUIGI MARIO SHROOBS ARE SHOTING AT SHIP COME HERE QUICK" so he went.

Luigi Mario ran fast there to where blasts were from shroobs and took out his powerps and shot at space to hit ships. Shroobs started flying from space into Luigi Marios ship so he had to do somthing quick. Luigi Mario punched a shroob and ran fast to get big fire flowr from the lock room so he went there and got it and shot shroob again in teh legs and they fell and Luigi Mario shot again and defeatd them. Luigi Mario lookd at dead shroobs and said to them "Shroobs we are mushroom people and you are shroobs but we dont need to kill things like us" and then pushed them into space.

After teh normil shroobs the shroopas came and every thing got wet and messy and lightningy becaus water hit teh mushroom tv and all the things and made sparks. After teh shroobs sent the shroopas other shroobs with big heads came and Luigi Mario had to runaway becaues there was to many of those and they were killing other mushroom people on teh ship.

"Mushroom people army guys hurry and come in ship!" Luigi Mario said to the mushroom people there becaus shroobs were killing them and he was in a escape ship and ready to go. 3 other mushroom people came just in time becaus the big ship blew up n they were flying fast in space and going to the Crystal Star to meet the army base and get ready fo tight.

Luigi Mario had to fly fast and go a round tings liek shroob ships and things. Then out of no where BOOM happend and the back of the espcape ship fell open n one of the army toads fell out and explodd in space then another one closed it and said "NOOOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER!" and then got tired and slept.

Luigi Mario lookd a front of him and seen shroob shooting at him so he did a barral roll and teh lasers went around him and went away. Luigi Mario sawd the Crystal Star in Space so he put the ship faster and went there quick becaus a lot of shroobs were there. Luigi Mario shot like "bang bang bang" from teh ship and made shroobs blow up and then landed ship on teh Crystal Star.

Luigi Mario said to teh other 2 army guys "Were here now get powerp n kill shroobs fast" so they did but when they left a ship landed and skwashed them.

Mushroom people army guys were all dying fast and Luigi Mario had to save them but he didnt know how but then he saw something and went to it and piced it up and said "no we win" to himself.

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	Black Squirrel Feb 28 2009, 12:52 PM
Perhaps you should refrain from posting edited fanfiction Just because it sorta sucked then and it sorta sucks now.


	Gersony Mar 1 2009, 9:46 AM
Quick Luigi and Mario, Shrob Shoting at ship!


	Vitiman Mar 1 2009, 12:39 PM
Sweet my review is up great update anyway


	Nonoke Mar 2 2009, 12:21 PM
Sorry, but I think the story needs more work. Things seem random and sudden, and there's numerous spelling and grammar errors.


	weirdestchild Mar 2 2009, 1:27 PM
Hurray! This will be challenging to read since my voice has decided to change to a deeper voice today. Don't worry, it'll be on Youtube by the end of the day! Just need the author's user/name to give proper credit. EDIT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPTZN-7TLCg THE EPIC FAN-FICTION READING


	Wario Bros. Mar 2 2009, 5:58 PM
The stories are okay. Plus this has a lot of typos. And I really don't like hearing Mario Mario and Luigi Mario ALL the time.


	Nicholas Ainsworth Mar 2 2009, 6:53 PM
Quote (Nonoke on Mar 2 2009, 7:21 AM) Sorry, but I think the story needs more work. Things seem random and sudden, and there's numerous spelling and grammar errors. Good job, the humor went right over your head.


	Nonoke Mar 2 2009, 9:41 PM
Wait, so it was intentional? I don't have a really good sense of humor, so I miss out a lot when jokes and funny stories are told.


	Mr. Malakoopa Mar 2 2009, 10:32 PM
Too boring.


	Nacky Slocker Mar 3 2009, 4:40 PM
Hey guys, I myself am not too interested in the story, and some of the grammer may need some improvement, and I get really annoyed with "Luigi Mario", but he's still making something, give him some CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Although it's probably not a good idea too paste it on an update. Some of it's funny, some of it gets confusing.


	MegaTailzChao Mar 3 2009, 11:28 PM
Quote (Nacky Slocker on Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM) Hey guys, I myself am not too interested in the story, and some of the grammer may need some improvement, and I get really annoyed with "Luigi Mario", but he's still making something, give him some CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Although it's probably not a good idea too paste it on an update. Some of it's funny, some of it gets confusing. IT'S LIKE JOKES DON'T EXIST OR SOMETHING If I had actually written this it would be decent!


	Nacky Slocker Mar 4 2009, 9:28 PM
the best thing to find in a joke is (for me and all my friends) is for it to be clever, or highly very random. Very random doesn't work if it's all random. Ofcourse I'd probably get it better if I'd actually played M&LSS 2...


	MegaTailzChao Mar 4 2009, 10:55 PM
Quote (Nacky Slocker on Mar 4 2009, 3:28 PM) the best thing to find in a joke is (for me and all my friends) is for it to be clever, or highly very random. Very random doesn't work if it's all random. Ofcourse I'd probably get it better if I'd actually played M&LSS 2... Well if you like clever jokes, then I'd reccomend you read xkcd if you don't already. Of course, chances are they'll be too clever for the average citizen.


	Nacky Slocker Mar 5 2009, 12:50 AM
Quote (MegaTailzChao on Mar 4 2009, 3:55 PM) Well if you like clever jokes, then I'd reccomend you read xkcd if you don't already. Of course, chances are they'll be too clever for the average citizen. xkcd doesn't seem to be that clever, and I'd perfer something with less swearing (maybe I just hit the wrong section, but it had swearing) I've read a little bit, and it seems a little... odd. critisize me, I'll take it, but it seems that you can't, or I'm just not getting what you're trying to tell me (I do tend to have a pretty... different view on things, which sometimes is good and other times bad)I'll send you a PM.


	TheGreenGuy Mar 5 2009, 1:09 AM
Nice story. Can't wait for the next. My favorite part is... Quote Then out of no where BOOM happend and the back of the espcape ship fell open n one of the army toads fell out and explodd in space then another one closed it and said "NOOOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER!" and then got tired and slept. The effects are wonderfully explained, and this is very dramatic. Also, I know this is off topic, but check the "fangamez" affiliate.


	MegaTailzChao Mar 5 2009, 1:50 AM
Quote (TheGreenGuy on Mar 4 2009, 7:09 PM) Nice story. Can't wait for the next. Well be ready to wait, I'm not making another until Duke Nukem Forever goes gold.


	the_game_prince Mar 5 2009, 8:57 PM
Yahoo! Another update! Took awhile, concidering I don't know how constant updates here are...


	El Huesudo II Mar 5 2009, 10:45 PM
Quote (Nacky Slocker on Mar 5 2009, 12:50 AM) xkcd doesn't seem to be that clever, and I'd perfer something with less swearing (maybe I just hit the wrong section, but it had swearing) I've read a little bit, and it seems a little... odd. critisize me, I'll take it, but it seems that you can't, or I'm just not getting what you're trying to tell me (I do tend to have a pretty... different view on things, which sometimes is good and other times bad)I'll send you a PM. What you need is to lurk more. That's all. Hint: Find something called "Doom: Repercussions of Evil" (I think it was called that). And XKCD is actually quite clever, but it requires... specialized knowledge. Sort of.


	MegaTailzChao Mar 6 2009, 12:32 AM
Quote (El Huesudo II on Mar 5 2009, 4:45 PM) What you need is to lurk more. That's all. Hint: Find something called "Doom: Repercussions of Evil" (I think it was called that). And XKCD is actually quite clever, but it requires... specialized knowledge. Sort of. Actually this is Halos in Space. And if by "specialized knowledge" you mean "a gigantic nerd" then yeah!


	ShadowLuigi64 Mar 7 2009, 12:00 AM
Hooray the game was removed


	Neopolis Mar 7 2009, 1:48 PM
Do Hero Beginning next update! With um Waluigi Mario Luigi Mario's son.


	TheGreenGuy Mar 8 2009, 5:15 PM
Quote (Neopolis on Mar 7 2009, 1:48 PM) Waluigi Mario, Luigi Mario's son. Spooky...


	kuriguy Mar 8 2009, 8:07 PM
You have to work on your spelling. I mean "shoting"? "lookd"?


	MegaTailzChao Mar 9 2009, 4:13 AM
Quote (kuriguy on Mar 8 2009, 2:07 PM) You have to work on your spelling. I mean "shoting"? "lookd"? You know what? I'm not even going to bother anymore.


	Nicholas Ainsworth Mar 9 2009, 2:37 PM
Quote (kuriguy on Mar 8 2009, 3:07 PM) You have to work on your spelling. I mean "shoting"? "lookd"? :joke: :your head: Please resolve this.


	bigmariofan1.0 Mar 9 2009, 10:12 PM
I like how everyone is expected to understand exactly what the whole thing is about. It's not like all of these people are 100% intact with all of your inside jokes. With that in mind, that doesn't mean everyone is supposed to laugh at it, much less actually find it funny.


	DJ Yoshiman Mar 10 2009, 6:59 PM
'Tis why, MTC, BS said it's probably not a good idea to do these anymore. I and several people like them, but the knowledge of it bypasses the majority of the members here.

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